Betaing, anyone?

I was wondering if anyone had time to do a quick beta of my Marigold Challenge story? I need to know if it's too dull for words, and I'm having trouble putting a satisfactory end on the thing, to boot, so I could really use some help.

Shirebunny fic (sort of)

I wrote this story over the summer for a Marigold Challenge, but as it goes so well with this plotbunny of shirebound, I thought I would post it again.

How did the hobbits receive their Gondorian finery and (we assume) full wardrobes in which to return home? What did each hobbit think? How were the clothes delivered? When? Did the king open the treasury of Minas Tirith and find bolts of silks and velvets? Was Faramir involved? Were the hobbits together, or were they alone? What did they each think when they first looked in a mirror and saw themselves in such finery?


( The Dress Code )